Saturday 28 September 2013

Nemesis. A Review of a Western Kaiju (Monster) Novel.

Mini-review #13
This is a series of short reviews for military SF and mecha SF.  You will not see a review of something I don't like as it isn't worth writing about in that case, but I will tell you what works for me and what doesn't about the stories I did like.  

Not exactly a military SF book, but the military does show up!  Nemesis is a recent novel by Jeremy Robinson, the author of the Chess Team technothriller/thriller novels.  This novel is his homage to the giant monster destroying the countryside phenomena made popular by the Japanese Kaiju (monster) movies like Godzilla.  There have always been giant monster movies and such over here (Cloverfield anyone?), but not so many books, so I was pretty interested to see what he wrote.
No spoilers ahead.  The book starts with an unexpected discovery in Alaska by the military.  A man is murdered and I almost stopped reading at that point in chapter 1.  I wasn't too impressed by the opening and was wondering how the rest of the book was going to stack up with sub plots after this.  Anyhow, I kept reading and the story did pick up.  This is a giant monster story intertwined with some illegal genetics research, really bad black ops types, and a nasty villain.  It does have the reading flavour of the typical technothriller / action novel, especially in the last two thirds of the book, and you'll like the military scenes too.  The monster itself is pretty imaginative and it is definitely not your black and white monster as it "Nemesis" has it's own character.

Mr. Robinson has written a pretty fun story, and while the ending is kind of typical of "Western" monster and horror movies, it was a fun ride.  If you like monster stories or even technothrillers, give this one a read.


Does it have a cast of characters listing? 
Nope.  There are really two main characters with Jon Hudson of the Department of Homeland Security and Sheriff Collins, a real tough lady who can do hand to hand and use a machinegun.  There are plenty of other characters, but nothing that will confuse you.

What is the scope / scale of the story? 
The scope of the story really focuses on the two main character and the monster.  The monster scenes with the characters are well done and bring an element of interaction to the monster epic you don't usually get.  The monster grows and the more military elements are drawn in.  The response by the military is kind of disorganized though and plenty of losses ensue.

Does it have likeable characters?
Jon is a likeable, down to earth character, who basically runs a teeny little X-files type operation.  Lots of eccentric supporting characters due to the nature of the homeland security unit they work for.  Many poor smucks dying, getting eaten, and getting squished.

Does it have an entertaining storyline?
Yes.The story starts slow, but the action picks up after the first quarter of the book.  The action grows as the monster grows.  The story integrates the characters well into the narrative which could have been lost as the monster could have taken over the story completely.

How is the internal consistency / plausibility?
I liked the story as a fun monster crushes city kind of story.  The biology is pretty amazing, probably not very likely, especially with the growth rates, monster abilities, and such, but you forgive these things as it is a monster movie in written form.  The military response is a little poor, but even my favourite giant robot movie like Pacific Rim had these WTF moments.  Still a fun read though.
  • A-10 Warthog engaging with 30mm gun vulcan that fires depleted uranium rounds that should have punch clean through the beasty in the early stages.
  • AMRAAM missiles are really air to air weapons and not for punching through armoured hides even if they have a 60 lb explosive warhead.  Hey, they used the same mistake in the Independence Day movie and I liked that too!
  • Tomahawk missiles seemed underpowered.
  • F-22s closing in tight to use guns.  Are you kidding me!  But it looks cool.
  • Apache gunships do not use mini-guns/vulcans.  They have 25 mm chain guns and don't need to come closer than a kilometre or two to engage you with cannon or Hellfire anti-tank missiles.
What cool bonus features are there?
The monster is cool.  Just read it to find out more.


Mechas That Fly In The New Chapter of Neo Ace

Chapter 20 of Neo-Ace is now up at Wattpad
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Everythings been a blur.  Busy days that feel like this picture.

I chose to finish off Chapter 27 this week which is a mecha chapter before flipping back to the developments happening in the GAC lab.  The action is running hot right now and it'll be like that for awhile.  A yes, the guinea pig and a little girl are going to play an important role in the next few chapters.

I bought an image over at Shutterstock and am now using it in conjunction with some line art I produced for the Neo Ace cover.  I think this will likely be the final cover image and you can see it over at Wattpad for now.

Writing Technique Note
Some people recommend pretty linear thinking for their writing.  I kind of multitask as I get bored of doing one thing all the time.  Sometimes I'm thinking about the title, the cover, or even another writing idea.  It never hurts to outline ahead either (you are prototyping).  You have to keep a focus so the work get done, but I have found that removal of risk is the best thing you can do first.  This means you should know the ending you want to write so you know what you need to do to arrive at it.  Anything that is difficult should be overcome so you know you don't have to waste time at the roadblock later or find yourself painted into a corner.  If this was a technical project that roadblock could make or break you later as you have built the wrong components or infrastructure.



Saturday 21 September 2013

The Kaiju Rising Kickstarter and I've Posted Chapter 19 of Neo Ace

Chapter 19 of Neo-Ace is now up at Wattpad
The plot thickens so to speak.  The story is now set to race ahead towards the conclusion of the first book.  I'm going to be writing Chapter 27 or 28 today depending on which plot thread I want to follow up on.
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I'm also looking at some cover art related materials at Shutterstock for Neo Ace and also at images related to Japan to supplement the ones I personally took for another ebook project.  There's a sale on at Shutterstock so I may as well take a look this weekend.

I originally wanted to try and get a more professional cover done, but it didn't work out with the artist I originally contacted.  Next time I talk to someone, it'll be like a housing contractor where the estimate is up front as it is a waste of time otherwise.  I may still use some freelance services from Elance or Crowdspring, but time will tell.  A cover over there can range from $200 to $500+ depending on who and what you want.  Have to sell a lot of books to make up for an investment like that.  I've sold several hundred, but it doesn't translate into many dollars at 99 cents minus the Amazon commission.

Kaiju Rising Kickstarter
I'm pretty excited to see this anthology of giant monster stories get funded.  They hit their base goal in 12 day and are now going for their stretch goals.  You wouldn't see anything like this normally so if you like big robots, you might also like big monsters, so pay them a visit!  I've backed them and I'll be waiting for my ebook in the email!

http://www.kickstarter.com/projects/1089607742/kaiju-rising-age-of-monsters-anthology

They have 240+ backers, but that still isn't a huge number, so I might definitely be writing in the wrong genre if I'm looking for higher volume sales like in romance, mystery, or even mainstream sci fi.  I'll finish my books as they are something I wanted to do, and then there will be other projects that will be just as fun to do!






Saturday 14 September 2013

Odin Class Mechs Used in Battle By Cadets

Chapter 18 of Neo-Ace is now up at Wattpad.  The cadets are finally training on the mechas that their PRECOG systems are designed to take full advantage of.  More of Mayumi's abilities become apparent and these new Odin class mechas are being utilized to their full potential.

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Power Rangers Super Sentai Giant Robot Toy seen at the toy store.  All the way over here from Japan.

It's a beautiful fall afternoon and after a little yardwork I'm back to writing up Chapter 26.  I can see the end of the novel within 10 chapters!  I'm looking forward to finishing this work and beginning the detailed outline for the sequel novel where the action really heats up in a global high-stakes game.  This first novel has a solid ending though that completes the first arc.  The second arc basically builds on it, but I won't leave the reader hanging at the end of Neo-Ace.

Saturday 7 September 2013

Odin Class HARM Units Are Introduced in Chapter 17

This chapter introduces the Odin Class HARM unit, the latest model from General Automata Corporation.  These battlefield robots were built with the cadets in mind as they incorporate the PRECOG system that utilizes their full personal potential. 

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Monday 2 September 2013

More revelations about Mayumi's past and Disrupting Class. Neo-Ace Chapter 16 posted at Wattpad.

It's been a busy week and the last long weekend of summer was pretty nice in Alberta.  I managed to complete a bunch of chapters last week.  Chapter 16 is now up on Wattpad.  In this chapter, Mayumi learns more about her past from her uncle Hiro who has hidden secrets from her for whole life.  What is Mayumi?  How will she react?

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3D Wire Head In Front of the Bow in Calgary

School starts tomorrow for the kids and I stopped to wonder what education would be like in 20 years.  Will they go to school or does everyone virtual conference in?  Are there physical schools?  What will teaching and learning be like?  How will social skills be developed?  What would be the big influences of technology be?  How will kids be graded or evaluated.

I have ideas about how this will shape up myself as I work in the education arena, but I'm not a teacher.  I kind of suspect that teachers will be more facilitators and mentors than the regular teacher myself because the education system hasn't really changed since the industrial revolution.  It it also an area where the introduction of expensive technology brings marginal gains.  For a few percentage points of improvement or less, the cost of education goes up every year and it is because of increasing salaries and misuse of tech.  This means that it is ripe for disruptive innovation and change once the dam breaks on government regulation and parental conservatism. The introduction of tech in most areas of business mean increased productivity and cost reductions, something that hasn't happened yet. I'm vague on this area in my story as predicting the future is for fortune tellers.  I just know AIs will be a big disruptor as having a personal tutor must work wonders.

Have a look for yourself here with this book "Disrupting Class" for more info if you are interested. Clayton Christensen is an MIT professor.  There are also presentations on Ted Talks.  Look up disrupting education or disruptive innovation.